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by Dvdr
Rated: E · User Poll · Other · #1834437
i just want some feedback on this piece. thanks!
Poll Question:
I need your help.

Every night while I am asleep, I flip my right eye lid over and perform microsurgery on it. I wake up with nothing less than a morbid case of pink eye, some slight bruising, and a light head ache. What has gone wrong with my DNA? What triggers this phenomena? How do I switch the subconscious mind to stay on track and rest? Was their a surgeon in my ancestry? Is this fate telling me I needed to go into optometry? I want this to stop and yet I am entirely unaware
that I am doing this until I wake up. Have we not mapped the human
genome, and can this information help me stop the insane surgeon that overcomes me whilst I sleep? I was told to ignore it and it will stop, I was also told that it could be worse, I could sleep walk and eat
things like burnt out cigarettes, regardless of how atrocious these
things are it does not add up to a solution. Two wrongs do not make a right.
Poll Options:
      This is awful
      this makes no sense
      this is awful and makes no sense
      I have no feeling upon reading this
      this is great and emotionally moving
      this is beautiful writing
      you should stop writing as this is terrible
      you should write a book, this is the best thing i have ever read
      do you speak English or are you an ESL speaker?
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