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differents points of view
1 Ed point of view.

The next morning after Ed’s roommate caught him on the couch having sex, getting it on hot and heavy with the doll. Ed tried to leave her alone by putting her in the closet and forgetting about her, but now she was the best relationship he had that was something more than just intimacy.
Ed knew he had a problem as he was at the bar working serving drinks. He watched guys walking by her and stare at her. Ed was deep in thought about what do about her. When a guy sat down next to her.
“ You’re hot, have I seen you in here before,” he said as he felt her dress. Then slowly moved his hand on her upper thigh knowing there was a chance he could get slapped, but she did nothing so he move it up further up.
“ What are you doing dude?” I hope your not making moves on my girl,” Ed said and snatches up his belonging.


2) Her point of view:

“ I just want to have fun,” she though. She been watching him for a while and has tried to stop looking, but she couldn’t. She was pretty sure he had too many drinks when he started touching her black velvet dress and she didn’t move. Then he moved his hand just under her skirt. She cut her eyes at Ed knowing any minute he was going to put a stop to her fun.

3) Dan’s point of view:

Sitting at the bar Dan was working on his third drink, he wanted to meet this girl. He gave her a glaze and a smile.
“Your hot, Have I seen you in here before,” Dan asked smiling. She was watching him from the corner of her eye and smiled. It was getting late and the bar was going to close soon, he had to make a move quick. As he put his hand on the edge of the soft dress, she didn’t move or push his hand away. He moved his hand under her dress at the hem and pressed his crotch that was hard against her leg knowing any minute he might get slapped.

When the mood was broken the bartender elbowed him. He grabbed the beauty and pulled her behind the bar the way she flew he realized she was a doll.
“Shit, I’m drunk.” Dan realized and slowly walked out of the bar.






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