Review My Short Story Contest!

by Cat-Claws is 20 Years Old!

Rated: E · Message Forum · Contest · #1196666

A very easy reviewing contest! Only 1 short story needs reviewing!

Hi! Welcome to my 1st reviewing contest! This must be your easiest reviewing contest EVER! For you only need to review 1 chapter. Yes, you read that right, *1* chapter to win a big amount of GPs! XD

REASONS FOR THIS CONTEST

You might wonder that, if it's only 1 short chapter, why not just put it in the auto-reward section? I have 2 reasons to not do so. First, it's not an item here (I provide a link to it below). And second, I don't want to give GPs to people who just write anything to pass the 250 characters limit (trust me, I've seen some). Besides, won't it be more challenging this way?

CONTEST RULES

1.) The review must be more than 500 characters.

2.) The review should contain comments/suggestions to grammatical errors and wording (especially the grammars), characterizations, and descriptions. Well, in short, make it detailed.

3.) You must submit the reviews in the site I provided below. When reviewing, you have to write a pen-name and your e-mail address (if you don't have an account) in order to be able to review. Then, you'll paste the review in this forum to be eligible in the contest.

4.) You can't edit the reviews, so make sure to make any before submitting it.

5.) The contest's deadline: 31st January 2007, 11:59 P.M., WDC Time.

CONTEST PRIZES

There will only be 1 winner that will take the grand amount of 5,000 GPs! This amount will increase if I have more entries and donations, of course, and there might also be a 2nd place, 3rd place, and some honorable mentions if I see lots of good entries! So join now and get a chance to win big! ^o^

ABOUT MY SHORT STORY

1.) Title: "Card Tricks: Chapter 1".

2.) Original Series' Title: "D.Gray-man".

3.) Length of story: 2,970 words (according to the site I posted it to).

4.) Genre (of my story): Humor, Action/Adventure, Slightly Introspective.

5.) Rating: E/G.

MORE ABOUT MY SHORT STORY

My short story is actually a fanfiction. So to read and review it, you have to do a little bit of a research to the original story. But don't worry, I provide some essential informations needed for you to review my story here (I also provide some links to the original series' webpages):

1.) Allen Walker is the main character of the story. He's a 12-year-old British boy in this story, and is an exorcist's apprentice. His left eye was cursed by his foster father when he attempted to ressurect him in a dark way, and now could see the souls of dead people trapped within an AKUMA. He was born with an anti-AKUMA weapon embedded in his left hand (called an "Innocence", which is also dubbed "The Crystal of God", the only thing that can destroy an AKUMA).

2.) AKUMA is a machine powered by a dead person's soul and is controlled by an evil character called The Millenium Earl. Basically, it's the thing the exorcists here have been trying to destroy.

3.) Mana Walker is Allen's foster father who adopted him when he was thrown away by his blood parents due to a deformity of Allen's left hand. He was truly loved by Allen. He died in an accident and later resurrected only to be destroyed by Allen.

4.) Cross Marian is Allen's exorcism master. He is a high-ranked exorcist (called an exorcist general) who avoids the organization he's in for whatever reasons. A slightly cruel (in a humorous way), stoic, irresponsible, and mysterious character.

Well, that's basically the characters you need to know. If it's not enough, you can always find more informations in the links below:

http://www.exorcists-order.info/

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/D._Gray-man

THE SHORT STORY LINK

And finally, the link to my work that needs the reviews:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3307097/1/

#^o^# GOOD LUCK, EVERYONE! #^o^#