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Rated: E · Poetry · Personal · #1354810
Quick on the spot ryme - (it just comes out!)
Noone is leaving me feedback,
Feedback is not being left.
When I cheak my account in the evening time,
I feel a slight pain behind my chest.
Noone is reading my peoms,
If they are, nothings being said.
The feedback I have I'm grateful for,
But what I NEED is feedback thats fresh!
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