Causes of the Saints

One of the darkest pieces I've ever written.

This is a concept piece I'm working on (like Green Day's album American Idiot or 21st Century Breakdown); each part is like a chapter to a story - haven't ironed out all the kinks, it still needs a lot of work.

I'm looking for opinions/thoughts on what is here so far, try and find some sort of direction to continue on with

I'd love any feedback you are willing to give