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by Cody
Rated: · Short Story · Other · #1820272
to kids never come back out of a house
In the small town of whoville there was a really old house. Nobody dared to go in there, people say this place is haunted or once was. These two boys Drake and Jake one day were walking along Adam st, right where the house stayed at.

“yo, lets go in there.” Jake said

“ Ok, im down but if something happens it’s on you.” Drake replied

They both began to walk up the steps, Drake was nervous as hell with drips of sweat running down his neck, And Jake as calm as could be. They then precede to the deck, as they was walking they could hear the wood cracking with each foot step.

“ Dude im nervous I don’t know if I can do this.

“ Come on, let’s just walk in and come right back out, and just think of all the people we could tell.” Jake said

“Ok, you right, lets do it and get it over with.” Drake said in a stuttering voice.

They then started to turn the doorknob, push the door open, and walked inside.

         “Oh my god, what that smell.” Jack said with a breathtaking look

         “ I don’t know but I want some.” Drake replied.

All of a sudden people started coming out everywhere.

         “Come on in, your more then welcome.” This weird man said.

         “Ok.” Drake and Jake replied simultaneously.

         Everyone began to sit down and got something to eat, they talked on and on.

         “ I thought this house was haunted” Drake asked the man

          “ Its not haunted, just when you come in we never let you out.”

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