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Rated: 18+ · Short Story · Other · #2306785
From my banned DeviantArt. Story about two sisters shrinking in a apple orchard.
Characters: Little sister (Point of view)- Age 7, skinny, tall for her age, and has medium length red hair. Older sister named Jane- Age 18, athletic build, normal height, and has a ponytail of red hair. Other little girl- Around the little sisters age, skinny Mexican girl with long brown hair.

It was just supposed to be a fun trip to the apple orchard with my big sister Jane but something absolutely insane happened! The day started normally, we drove to the orchard and picked some apples for a while. We walked around and talked while looking for the best apples. We had heard some weird rumors about this orchard, but we just assumed them to be funny stories about the place. Some of the stories were absolutely insane. Or so we had thought.

We found an absolutely perfect apple a little high up in a tree. “Sis look up there! That apple looks absolutely perfect! Let me get on your shoulders so I can grab it.” I said to Jane. “You’re right, wow I’ve never seen one as perfect as that one.” Jane said while picking me up and putting me on her shoulders. I grabbed the apple and took a chomp out of it and gave Jane the apple for her to taste it too. She took a chomp as well. The apple turned to mush in her hand and practically disintegrated away. Before we could even say anything both of us were gripped with pain in our bellies and began shaking and grabbing out bellies. I blacked out for a second and next thing I knew I was on top of an apple in our basket. I had shrunk somehow!

I started to freak out, which is warranted, I think. I was smaller than an ant and I was trapped amongst a bunch of apples. I got the top of the highest up apple in our basket and tried to find my sister. “JANE! I’m up here where are you?” I yelled out to my sister. “I’m over here, one sec let me crawl up to you.” She yelled back at me. I just laid back as I looked around astonished at what was going on. Jane got up to the top with me and we looked around. “Calm down we’ll be fine. We just need someone to find us and take us to the front desk. Someone here will be able to help us out.” Jane told me. So, we sat there and waited for quite a long time. Waiting for someone, anyone to find this basket and find us.

After a while we heard a little girls voice approaching us. She sounded like she was around my age. “Mommy look! Its someone’s basket of apples.” The little girl said to her mom. “Odd, they must have left it here for some reason. Let’s just buy those apples I guess.” The mom told her daughter. The little girl grabbed the basket and started hauling it up to buy the apples. We were being thrown around and tried to find something to grab onto. We found a tiny hole in the apple and crawled in hoping no bug was there. We didn’t want to risk getting crushed by the apples and at our current size being out in nature would be really scary! Luckily there wasn’t a bug in the hole. Hopefully it was big enough to stop the girl from eating the apple, but we just wanted to wait for them to buy the apples then we could try and get their attention.

After a while of being thrown around we were still for a bit. We assumed they were buying the apples. Before we could get to the exit, we felt the apple fall into something and we were both smashed into the flesh of the apple. We were stuck inside the apple now. We could hear the girl talking to her mom again then we felt the apple move. “This one looks really yummy! I’m going to eat this one first!” The little girl said to her mom. I started trying to get free and started screaming.

CHOMP

The sound echoed through our bodies as the entire apples shuddered from the girl’s bite. As I squirmed around, I was able to get free from the apple. I got Jane free too but then…

CHOMP

We were thrown around as the girl took another bite. This time, we were included in that bite. As she started to chew, we fell out of the apple and onto her tongue. All around us the little girl’s teeth broke apart the apple and the juices and saliva surrounded us. Me and Jane grabbed onto each other as the girl swallowed the chewed-up apple. We were pulled down into darkness as the smell of acid took over our noses. “Jane, she ate us! We are inside some random girl now. I want to go home!” I said to my sister and started to cry. My sister tried to comfort me until we plummeted into the bile that was inside this girl’s stomach. With a splash we fell into the acid along with the flesh from the apple.

All around us was darkness and disgusting sounds of digestion. The stomach started churning around us as more apple pieces fell all around us. We held onto each other and swam to a pile of chewed up apple and got on top. I started to freak out now, “We’re going to digest! We’re going to become this random little girl’s poop, I DON’T WANT TO BE POOP! POOP IS DISGUSTING!!!” I held onto Jane and kept on crying. “Don’t worry kiddo we aren’t becoming poop today, I promise! Start digging into the chewed-up apple, if we trap ourselves inside the flesh it might digest around us and keep us safe long enough to get to the large intestine.” Jane told me while hugging me. “Then we’ll have to crawl out of this little girls butt, ew!” I said to my sister. “That’s much better than coming out of it as a turd girly.” Jane said. We both burrowed into the apple island we were standing on and covered the exit with more apple to keep us safe. We created a little compact cave in the apple and waited to see what would happen next.

We could hear the scary sounds of digestion echo around us as the girl’s belly slowly digested the apple she ate. We could hear her muffled voice too as she talked to people, but it just sounded like gibberish down here. We could feel the pile of apple mush get compacted down even more. We were pulled down somewhere and Jane said “We probably just entered the small intestine. Let’s hope this holds.” We were slowly pulled along as sizzling and groaning echoed through the small intestine.

Hours went by until we eventually stopped hearing digestion sounds. We could feel something pull on our chamber then we fell slightly. “I’ll bet we’re in the large intestine now!” Jane said to me as we started digging to get out. We were in the large intestine now. The smell was disgusting! All around us was waste that didn’t digest. No poop though. We walked though this girl’s large intestine. Every so often we could feel a rumbling echo around us. As we got closer to the colon more poop started to accumulate around us. Luckily it looked like the girl didn’t have to go to the bathroom yet. More rumbling started happening as we got closer to the exit until we felt a wooshing feeling surround us. The smell made me nauseous immediately. Both of us could feel the air around us pick us up as the little girl farted.

We were both pulled into the air and sucked out at tremendous speed. I grabbed on to Jane as we flew through the rest of the large intestine and out of the girl’s anus. The girl let out an innocent little toot, but it felt like a hurricane to me and Jane. I held on tight to Jane and closed my eyes until I felt us slam into something soft. I opened my eyes and saw that were finally outside! But we were inside the girl’s panties. We looked up at where we just exited and saw a little butt all around us. Jane moved a little and we fell out from beneath the girl’s butt and down underneath her. Jane grabbed onto me and pulled me to the front of the girls’ panties. At this size the girl’s body seemed massive. All of a sudden, the girl must have sat down as we were pulled into her body. Jane was able to pull us free and out of her panties and into her pants. We smelled like poop and felt terrible, but Jane just kept pulling me until we got out of the pants leg. We popped out and saw that the girl was outside playing in some leaves. We ran as fast as we could away from her but at our size, we barely moved at all. We could slowly feel ourselves begin to grow! The girl was called inside and as we grew me, and Jane ran to the woods in the back of the girl’s house until we became normal sized again! We quickly ran home to get cleaned up and explain the insane stuff that had happened the previous day to our mom. I got to take a nice long shower and relax, finally free of the hell that was that little girl’s digestive system.
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