I'm a high school student, bent on the dream of publishing a fantasy book someday. This dream of mine is at the very forefront of my goals, and any criticism/advice that can be given is crucial in my book's developement. I post the book, one chapter at a time, on this site for review. So, if you feel generous or curious, read my work, review and comment it. I would greatly appreciate anything you all have to say. I don't catch every mistake. Don't be afraid to criticize me!