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Hi everyone I was wondering if any of you could help me in
editing the story I've been writing for a couple of days now I would seriously appreciate it if you could.
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Since this is the whole content of your Portfolio --
 Who is the real monster  (E)
A girl is looking for food
#2216474 by Anji_A

-- I expect that this is the item for which you are seeking input.
         Start with theme. Finish this sentence with one word: This is a story about ______. Hunger? No. Desperation? In part, but the word must be of your choosing.
         Next, what is your subject? Build on your progress. This is a story about the ______ of a ______.
         There is no rule, but shorter works are generally best when kept close to their theme and subject. Longer pieces can take a wider embrace.
         Nuff sed fur now. Welcome to the site. I hope you find your time here as rewarding as I have.
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