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Can someone please review my story
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It is probably best to put this request in the review request listing. You will be seen by more people and have a greater chance of being noticed. Also, when asking a request like this, using the bitem command will make it easier for people to find your content.

I do see you are new here, so I really do recommend reading the Writing.Com 101 at the top right of the home page. This should help you.

Good luck going forward!
Nothing good, please don't read my story, 1: it's not done
2: I need the ok from hubdub. 😰😱😨😵😥 🚫👮💵
Not to good
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