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dee  
Thanks alot . I will take that into consideration. I also would appreciate it if you would review my other works....

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dee  
I am the author of " The Graves of a Lover's Revenge ". Thanks for reviewing my piece. Can you plzzz help me improve this short story. ? I appreciate you input and honesty.
Sometimes when I write, I speak the words in my head like I'm talking to someone. Try it. Take the first part of your story...rewrite it verbally in your head, then write that thought process down. Don't worry about the punctuation..you can change that later. Take the next part and do the same thing.You will find the text flows better and you will avoid three to five word sentences when not needed. Go to www.liteworldonline.com. This is a personal project I am writing. Take a look. Email me.
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