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5803, can you please use the advice both KungPaoPolice and RageofSoul left in here? It's jarring to read a chapter and then find your work continuing that chapter, with so many grammatical mistakes.
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I'd like to reiterate what RageofSoul left here in 2013 - Please, if you are going to add to interactives, use correct grammar and, ideally, proper spelling. Paragraphs are usually a good idea as well.

Adding items that are at times near nonsensical adds nothing to the reader's enjoyment or experience - just as a painter will hone his skills for years before presenting his works in a gallery, so the writer too must at least learn the basics before showing his work to others - constructive criticism from ones peers is important, but there has to be some starting point before one even starts requesting it.

Sincerely

Geoffrey
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