I am so glad that I use the weekly goals on here, or I'd probably be stumped switching notebooks a lot of the time instead of writing. I may start chapter three here soon if I can find a way that will end chapter two. But other than that, does anyone have any author accounts like facebook pages, or post on instagram under an author account or use twitter for their book notes and such? |
And again, idk why I can't decide to just stick with one fic. I switched yet again. And when I did, I come to find out that the pen I used was starting to leak a tad. Nothing major, and that's the first to ever do that to me. I found where the leak is, just have to be careful using it...anywho I need a tad help with this one part. Someone is getting slapped [don't worry, both male] how would you describe the feel of the slap? |
Hmm... Interesting question. Maybe a shock of pain. If it were hard enough, it might jolt their head to the side. My instinct is to describe the sound more, like the crack of the palm hitting the face, the woosh of the breath leaving the mouth, etc. Have you tried lightly slapping yourself on the hand or leg and trying to describe the sensation you feel? |