I usually don't like poems much, but I loved yours. It made me sad and content at the same time (I can't help feeling content when I think of summer evenings). I can easily visualize the woman sitting there and I'd love to know all the things about which she was thinking.
There is one tiny thing I might criticize: The second paragraph seems superfluous. Of course, it somehow sets the scene, but the scene didn't need to be set. It doesn't necessarily have something to do with the focus of the poem (at least what I think is the focus: the woman).
Nevertheless, I loved your poem because the rhythm flows evenly and you are great at creating an atmosphere. Well done!
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