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Review of Alone with Lana  
Review by Fictionjunkie69
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
what an intense and at first unexpected piece. It drew me in, allowing me to fall through a current of varying emotion. I thought the description was a real strong point, especially in relation to the leaves and their movement. Also your ability to not tell the reader to much to soon, instead allowing me to discover and be surprised as I went on.
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