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What another fabulous fan fiction creation! 
I love Maggie Smith and have heard her interviews about her part.
It has a fun and light vibe with lots of details of place and people.
The pictures add style and grace to the page. I still wonder why you don't center them! LOL But everyone has a different perspective. LOL The little castle glyph is lovely and might look nice centered at the top. 
Oh, This is so sweet and has the calming vibe of a lullaby! I could picture the little dragon and the dream flight! It makes sense a dragon would dream of this. 
The repeating verse at the beginning and the end make a lovely refrain and the image is so vivid. The middle verse is fun to read with its descriptive word pictures too. I really enjoyed the form as you repeat the last word of one line in the next! Wonderful composition.
Hiya Richard! Welcome to WDC from "
Yay! You wrote a poem and nailed the winter. We are getting a blast here right now!
The short poem was fun to read with a sing song flow and rhyme. the imagery is clear and I can imagine how "bold" one has to be to go out there and shovel, or get wood if you have a wood stove or even clear off the car...what a pain...especially as one gets older as the poem says. Kids don't have such important chores when it is winter. LOL
I liked how you kept the rhyme simple and were able to use the "old" rhyme in both verses and the repetition of the long "o' sound in many words is very effective. It echoes a blowing snow so creates a pleasing soundscape and adds to the picture of winter.
The last line made me ponder with your cool use of the word:"hold", a hold of...? I take it to mean a stop 
My review has been submitted for consideration in "
I so admire your ability to write a sonnet with such engaging images and emotional potency. I liked the use of nature to as a setting and descriptive metaphor. 
The form is well composed with 10 syllable lines and rhyming couplet. The rhyme scheme is intact and your chosen vocabulary with the use of assonance and consonance makes for an appealing soundscape as I read aloud. eg. Long e sound, b, d, s. etc. Wonderful.
Thanks for sharing this moving vision and fine model of a sonnet, and for entering the site contest! 
I was drawn by the title that popped up on Random Reads and after I read the piece I could see how all the voices could be related. This was a very intriguing and originally woven piece of writing. It feels like all the voices in one's head meeting! LOL I think it is indeed a mystery item. 
I think the setting of a cave where tones can echo is brilliant and some of your letters repeated mimic that spacial tone. It really comes across that these voices cannot see anything or each other.
The use of coloured font for different voices is helpful in the read, which could get quite confusing. 
You write about Vampires? LOL And with Romania words! How cool is that? I like the originality of adding actual foreign in the dialogue. It so adds to the characterization of the mother and the background of the vampire history.
And the Mother knows best line! Too cute. 
I wondered what her true face was. 
The free style suits the reflective tone and theme and the use of assonance and bits of alliteration added to the flow as I read aloud.I wondered about a period after "frailty" but then I see you want it to somehow connect to the next thought. 
Oh I love ravens and there are a few that live round the woods here, cawing messages and watching! 
Happy 2020 Keaton Foster! I am happy to review to celebrate you! 
I enjoyed pondering on your free style poem where you reflect on faith. I like how you talk to God in the opening and and near the end repeat the same words. The rhyme is like a refrain and the question why no reply is a common one to ask. The rule of "silence is golden" is effectively added and made me think that that could be where the answers come...in a silent mind that has let go of queries, judgements, expectations and thoughts to listen to the wee small voice that is not heard in all the ego's din. 
and this popped up on the Random Reads! What an interesting and unique topic to find. Not many non-fiction show up! I couldn't resist a peek at Mark Twain and poetry at the same time. 
Goodness! What a prompt! It looks like you did a fine job ferreting out information and that is one long poem to interpret! 
I had no idea he had so many names to write under and it is sad that he did not have a lasting progeny for his legacy. He even had a story translated into classical Greek! Amazing. I studied that language but not his book. LOL
I was drawn to the alliterative title and its concept that implies Peace is not won with ease or without cost. Your short poem bears out that theme with a bit of a twist.
The contrast that acclaim can be won through war activities while acts of peace remain unsung is an effective one. And made me sad to think about. Generals are more well known throughout history while only a few who stood for peace are famous. Mother Teresa, Ghandi come to mind.
You did a great job with only 24 syllables showing the meaning of the key word "gallantry" . I enjoyed reading it aloud and appreciate how you added rhyme and instances of consonance to add a pleasant soundscape.
This piece uses the prompt words in an inventive way and I am impressed with your imagination. It was pleasing to read aloud with some lovely sound combinations and images like the "frost bitten winds of winter", the long O sound words in verse two, and the bit of repeating sound "en" and "penetrate" etc in the last verse. You really paint a vivid picture for the sense.
I absolutely loved what happens next. That little creature and his character is so vivid and the interplay with the group is so funny! I had to laugh. I think it is in character for Charmian to understand the pride of the little creature and make the first move. I enjoyed the well written dialogue and emotional expression as he agrees to be an ally! You unveiled his true nature in layers and I like the unexpected! 
The descriptions were clear and I could envision the scene. The narrative had a good flow though the line about the car felt short and out of place. Did we need to know this at this point, when it did not seem to feature in the story. In the scene at the end, they are running away so...does the car feature as I would assume it would get him caught. 
Wow. This is so inventive and entertaining a song that fits your persona over at Cupids' Arrows. I can imagine one sitting on cloud Nine jail banging on the bars to the blues number. The lyrics fit the style and I like the dropped letters as in "eatin' and "dat" etc. They add another bit of drama.
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