Wow! You must really love that sister of yours! I knew even before I got to the end notes that is was about someone in your life that you are very proud of and love very much.
My favorite part was...Loved ones cling to her against
the raging flood waters.
Beauty surrounds her.
Compassion is
her cloak, her
strength, a
shield.
I love that it makes her sound like a superhero......It makes the reader want to be like her...to be someones anchor through the storm. Very well done!
TTFN!
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