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Review by taha
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A direct story narrates the global political reality, deducing from the following story that a person cannot repay one debt with another.
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Review by taha
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I was greatly impressed by the story and depth of the events that unfold in it. The fights were exciting and full of thrill, and I loved how Carter and Arthur's characters were uniquely crafted.

I believe it is important to work on improving the transitions between scenes and event timing to make them more sequential and suspenseful. I also think you can enhance the description of some places and characters to make the story more realistic and appealing.

Overall, I enjoyed reading the story and look forward to more developments and surprises in the upcoming parts. Thank you for sharing it and good luck in developing it further!
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