When I read this, I feel like the man and woman are married. This woman loves this man but he doesn't treat her right. In about the middle she had a realization and escaped from the hell that was her marriage (or whatever their relationship was). I really loved "she twirled twirled twirled" because I imagine a young woman running in a field and dancing, happy. Overall, this poem was very nice.
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