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Review by afroking
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Really loveing all the chapters your putting out.Im really loveing Riley, Valerie,and all your other storylines.

"Now get on your knees and give me my hundred dollars." She holds a hand out expectantly to you." ending the chapter with that was such a tease, i can picture her makeing him beg to give up his money, I just love the way you write.

not really sure what GP does but heres 5000 for all your good work.plz continue
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Review by afroking
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
love all the chapters, my fav is with Saeko Busujima but I would love to see some about Saya Takagi. Great writing hope to see more from u
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Review of The Outcast  
Review by afroking
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Finally finished the Naga series. damn 400 ch+ great story sad to see it done. I give my thx to all authors who made this a epic story
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