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Review of Nobody's Perfect  
Review by Crystalline Faye
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Oh wow, I really like this! I'm not much of an expert on poetry, but I really liked the way this progressed from a sense of discontentment to a state of action.

You have a small typo, by the way: "You thought me much to dumb to understand." The 'much to dumb' should actually be 'much too dumb'. Just thought I'd let you know. ;)

Please keep up the good work!
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