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Review of Sober Siblings  
Review by Amanda
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You did a very good job with this short story. You were able to add the intensity in the short amount of time, the bonding between siblings, and their struggle together. I liked how thrilled they were in the end to find out it was a fire instead of a burglary, it made me "laugh out loud." Congrats, and keep on writing!
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Review of Winter  
Review by Amanda
Rated: E | (4.5)
The way you've worded the descriptions makes your poem very clear, and it's impressive that you were able to do this in such little words. Great job!
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