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Review of As You Go  
Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I can really relate to this piece. I suffer from a very deep depression as well.

keep up the good writing.
You did a really good job writing this piece. I can tell that you write from your heart.

alabama writer.
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Review of My Conflict  
Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo!!!!!!

You did a great job at writing this piece. I really enjoyed reading it a lot. Being a mother of three I can really relate to this piece.

Being yourself and who you are is the most important thing. Never try to hide the real you. Those who love you will still love you just as much.

You did a great job at expressing yourself.
keep up the good work.

Alabama writer
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Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hind sight is 20/20...LOL

I have recieved such calls and they can really get to you.

I did however find one typo
"I hung up the phone and said (noting)" Should have been nothing.

You did a good job with this piece. Keep up the good work.

Alabama Writer
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Review of Night Time Creek  
Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (4.5)
I totally like this piece. I just returned from a two week camping trip at a creek. This piece brings back the fun times we had sitting around the camp fire at night.

The flow to this piece is very smooth and natural. It is well written and well thought out. You did a good job with this one.

Alabama Writer
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Review of Slipping  
Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an awsome piece you have written here. I can so totally relate to what you are saying in this one.

I enjoyed reading it, and can't wait to read more of your pieces. This one is well thought out and well written.
The flow is very good and natural.

Keep up the great work.

Alabama Writer
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Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have read several of your poems. They are very good, and well written.

You did a very good job at expressing yourself in each of them.

I am new to this site, but not to writing. I have been writing for about 1 year. I am always looking to improve my writing and hope to be able to do this here.

Thank you for sharing your work with us here.

Alabama Writer
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Review of Air Time  
Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed playing this game.
It is unusually to have found this on a writing site, but I am so glad that I did. *Smile*

I am new to the "From out the Darkness Group" and wanted to check out some of the writings of its members.

Keep up the good work.

Alabama Writer
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Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a great question. I feel that all friends made in person or online is still a great friend.
It really doesn't matter how you make friends as long as you treat each other as a friend.

I would not be afraid of meeting a true friend no matter where we met at.

I am new to the "stitchcraft Group" and wanted to check out some of the writings of its members.

Keep up the good work.

Alabama Writer
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Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is hard to be happy with one season or another....LOL
At least it is for me. I like the spring and fall. *Smile*

You have picked a very good subject for this piece. Kudo's to you!

I am new to the "stitchcraft Group" and wanted to check out some of the writings of its members.

Keep up the good work.

Alabama Writer
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Review of Misc. Poems  
Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
These are very nice pieces.

I really enjoyed reading them very much.

They is well thought out and well written. The flow is smooth and natural making it easy for your readers to read and get into the pieces.

Thank you for sharing them with us. Just one suggestion, I think that if you put each one of these up as seperate items your readers could review each of them instead of all of them as a whole. *Smile*


keep up the good work.

Alabama Writer
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Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is such a sweet piece. Congrats on making it sixteen years, in todays standards that is a long time.

You did a good job at showing how you feel for your wife in this piece.

This piece is well written, the flow is smooth making this piece a joy to read.

thanks for sharing

bama
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Review of Finding Strength  
Review by Alabama_Writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is such a sad and painful piece. One that I can relate so very well to.

Self-imposed exile is a very hard way to live. It cuts you out of your families lives. And belive it or not they want you to be involved in their lives.
I have lived this way so many years, not sure that I will ever find my way back to where I truly want to be within my family.

You did a good job at painting this picture for me.

thank you for sharing this

bama
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