ABNegative's (allenbartus) Reviews

ABNegative

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18 Total Reviews Given

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#4250636

Review of Why Do I Write

Review by ABNegative

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Only the good writers can feel the passion they way you do when writing. To see and hear what lies deep inside banging on the door of your mind and soul to be let out.
It's what I see everyday but finding the key to open that door is harder than it seems, at least for me.

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#4222029

Review of The First Wal*Mart on Mars

Review by ABNegative

Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

LOL, Not sure how I linked to this but I gotta say I couldn't stop laughing. The MOOre I read the MOOre I laughed. I have my price gun ready for MOOre trouble with tribbles.

Sorry that's the best I can do right now. Sleep deprivation from the lack of warm milk.

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#4222021

Review of Fake

Review by ABNegative

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Very good! I have to say it was like I watching everything on tv as you wrote it. And the sad part is... It's all TRUE!
Don't give up hope, times will change then we can all say; "told you so!"

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#4215759

Review of What I want to be, when I grow up.

Review by ABNegative

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I have a bookmark a friend gave me... gads, twenty years ago that I keep nearby.

"Dreams will give you wings" Never lose your dreams or your wings.

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#4210084

Review of The Troll Wife

Review by ABNegative

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

Great story. It proves love is not skin deep and can be eternal.

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#4193959

Review of Between Tigris and Euphrates

Review by ABNegative

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Short and to the point. The politics of war at it's best and worst with the military caught in the middle getting the blame no matter what.

Sometimes I wonder what's the point of it all? If politicians had to fight these wars... would there be any?

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#4113004

Review of If I were to go, before I am old

Review by ABNegative

Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

Wow! Great job! I feel like I just read the way I have been feeling lately only you wrote it better than I ever could have expressed.

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#4112422

Review of STARSHIP GUARDIANS

Review by ABNegative

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

I like this story. However, I am now curious as to how they got to this point in their travel/history. What catastrophic events made them create this colony ship? Why were they so many sections sealed off and eventually forgotten for so long? What true events forced them mutiny and travel to the previously unknown levels? Questions... yes! Still good story with lots of history you can delve into.