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Honest. I do not review harshly or with malicious intent. I only want to give you my honest opinion nothing more, nothing less. • I review on my phone from the hours of 6am -3pm. Back to doing reviews my apologies for all those that requested one and I didn't receive it in time.
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Identifying weak points in plot, identifying common grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes.
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I love pretty much everything. I am even a fan of gore.
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I am not sure, I love a little bit of everything.
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I am open to reviewing any and all forms of writing.
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Review of The Gap  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Poor Simon he is having a really tough year in school. What can go wrong absolutely did go wrong. It was quite the tale, and reminded me a bit of myself to be honest. It was comical, but also, just a tad sad.

I'd like to think that Simon grew out of his "awkward" stage.

Thank you for sharing,

KMS

This review is thought out freely, given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely
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Review of Heart Attack  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is beautiful. I can feel your emotions through my computer screen and it is quite refreshing.

I love "I just had a heart attack". A heart attack in the very essence is pain, the squeezing of a vital organ so hard in your chest that you lose breath, and the only sound that one permitted is an agonized groan. Jesus.

You saw her, and you had a heart attack from the look of her, she was that vital organ inside your chest beating that intense rhythm from the first moment, and now all I can think about is she must be one lucky woman.

Thank you for sharing,

KMS

This review is thought out freely, given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thoroughly enjoyed this engrossing short. I was a bit sad that there was not more to read to be honest.

I do have to say although the short is really nice, and the flow was great, but I have to say Jenna sounded a bit bored for a woman who was suppose to be in love, and that is really my only negative. I was like she sounds like she is bored of this man, not in love, but other than that it was a great read, and I would love to read more.


Thank you for sharing,
KissMeSlowly


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