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Review of Morgana la Fay  
Review by Rhayven
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is an excellent piece - and really portrays the mysticism behind Morgana la Fey.

Ahh, what a tale, too. Though consumed by greed of power - And ultimately set upon her doom - She does have a right to boast. And you speak it well, when you state

"Merlin has nothing on me,
My darkness has set me free."

I especially like the last bit.

"My name strikes fear into men’s minds,
“Morgana la Fay” will their souls bind.
My mind is darkness and lies.
And around me, everybody dies."

Reminds me of many. Though, the very last line reminds me a bit of myself. More ....grief, and beating myself up - But it doesn't change facts of thinking.

Anyways - Very well done indeed :)
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