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Review of A Family Lost  
Review by Andrew Nichols
Rated: E | (5.0)
OMG dianne! i read some of your other stuff after the last one, this is such a sad story in so short a piece. i only read half of it and i was shocked how into i got. There isn't any critiquing i can add to this. well done and keep writing, ill read it!
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Review by Andrew Nichols
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is an excellent story, i cannot wait to find out what happens next. i know this is not completed, but you have many spelling and grammer mistakes. it is not at all unreadable, and i am really enjoying this story. please continue this soon! i also like the foreshadowing, while some of it is a little obvious, i would re write some to make it more hidden.
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by Andrew Nichols
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a very well written and compelling story. I felt as if i was actualy reading this man's final thoughts on the fast pace of technology. i felt the ending was a little abrupt, personaly i would have tried to flesh it out a little more, but it works as is. thank you for writing this and please continue!
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