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Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (5.0)

I enjoyed reading what you wrote, it was easy to read and

easy for someone to understand your thoughts or your

character's thoughts. I am not sure this is your personal

thoughts, but for someone that has opened that box and

touched insanity, that is where one can get some of the

best stories. I have looked over pretty much every year

of my life and not all of it puts me in an angelic

spotlight, but what one hell of a ride it was reliving all

that again while I wrote my thoughts.




Thanks for writing this, it is exactly the opposite of

what I have done to bleed my story onto paper.

Annie
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Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (3.5)

You got a smile from me! I absolutely love reading limericks

I cannot write them, but I sure do enjoy the reaction I have

to someone's writing work.

I would have liked it even more if you would have continued

with another couple of stanzas though.
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Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (3.5)


This had a few funny parts in the story, but I am not sure

that I would call it comedy. I too wrote my novel with

comedy in mind, but I do not think that I would call what I

wrote comedy. I enjoyed your story, no matter what you call

it, and I guess someone telling you that you wrote

something that they enjoyed is well more worth the effort

than fitting into one genre.
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Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (3.5)


I liked what you wrote, how you proselytized your demands

and generalized who the divine might be. Such forcefulness

and a person that likes to make commands. I wonder what

you were doing that you would want to write it, but then

I think about the years that I have done my own wrestling

of my thoughts. Hope you have a great day.
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Review of All That I Heard  
Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (4.5)
Aww, very good.

Now the site is getting to the good stuff, I get it. I have done that too and you said it so eloquently. Anguish, loneliness and invisibility, the stuff that can make some really good art. Songs, Paintings, Stories and sculptures.
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Review of MIRAGE 1  
Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting,

Years ago your poem would have been skipped over with the rest of them, but if one is being honest with themselves they can understand what you wrote.

I like the part about the imaginations, what a wild ride mine has taken me on...some good and many many not humorous at all. The honesty about enjoying the plight of others...I get that too, and have been on the other end of it too. Maybe that is why it is so enjoyable.

If writing.com wants to continue to send me poems, I hope that they be more like yours, harsh, funny and honest.
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Review of LOVE  
Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (3.0)
I felt like singing while reading your poem, some say love is a river....

Its a hunger
An endless aching need.

Just remember in the winter
And in the spring
Becomes the rose.

I completely messed up the words to that song, but I had fun writing. Okay back to your review.

I want to answer all of your comments and questions with my comedic way, but I don't know if you would appreciate it or not. Not that your poem needs made fun of or work, your poem was nice. I guess this has always been my way when I read poems.

Now songs...sing me a song with those words matched with the instruments playing and you quite possibly you will get a different response from me.
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Review of His Fate  
Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (4.0)
After going through so many poems that need some cheese to go with the crying. I am not kidding, there were at least 10 that I read half way through and pressed the "NEXT" button, until I came to yours.

I like how it doesn't tell me how I am supposed to feel about the poem or story. Your poem puts it out there, and lets the reader decide how to perceive it, reminding me of the stories of Grim. Those stories did the same.

Nice work!
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Review of The Longer Road  
Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks Jack

How perfect, that after just finishing writing this novel, I find your poem to be reviewed. Nicely written and you are right, you could take it any way that you want.

I am not really into poetry, but I do read them once and awhile. This one was a good one.
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Review of Green Grocer  
Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (4.0)
Many years ago, I used to write many different pieces on varying subjects to gain acknowledgment from any person in the hopes to turn that reader into a customer for a business that I had.

Some of the writing that I would do, was not necessarily what I agreed with as much as it would be what I wanted other people to hear from me. Taking different viewpoints and changing it up to get a variety of potential customers.

While people get easily angered or sad of what one politician might say or do, he or she needs to maintain a certain balance when talking to people. Business owners do this same thing, is it crooked or immoral or treacherous?

I don't know, I am not them. They are trying to make money to feed themselves and loved ones, like many other people. Your writing reminded me of the way I used to write years ago.
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Review of In Good Company  
Review by Annie Day
Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting poem, and so much is included in so little few words. Not that there was enough, you made your point and added in some history stories along with a few films that I have seen or I have heard of.

The only thing that I found a little humorous and it may have been your attention, is the last line. John Chaney gave other people's misfortunes to other people, he spread it around.

Anyway I thought it was funny and wanted to thank you for the smile.
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