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Review of The Best Of Me  
Review by Veronica Cruise
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Erica,
This poem hit home to me for I myself has been hurt in more ways than just one from my lover. I can feel the pain that you portray in this poem and I see the tears. Very descriptive. Very well written. Keep up the good work and welcome to Writing.com.

Sincerely,
Victoria
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Review of Only Time  
Review by Veronica Cruise
Rated: E | (4.0)
I would like to first state, very well written! Secondly you seem to have a very phylisophical mind. You think deep and I like that. It shows that there is more to you than just a television and video games or whathave you. I gave you a 4.0 because I feel that the begining of your poem is very rocky. When I say rocky I mean it doesn't read very smooth. After your question about being cursed, the poem reads smooth and rythmic and I think that is what you should be looking for. My suggestion is this, always read and reread your own work. Have a friend read it as well, and make any changes to it. Over all you seem to have a lot of tallent and potential. Keep up the good work.
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Review by Veronica Cruise
Rated: E | (4.5)
This item was very well written I think. It was extremely informative to a newcomer such as myself and I found it very helpful as well as very interesting. The only reason I didn't rate a perfect 5.0 is because I feel you could add a little bit of information on whether or not a newcomer starts out with any points or not. You've also forgot to mention if the GP's can be used for anything else besides offering them when someone reviews their work. I would like to suggest you add a section on here pertaining all the uses of the GP's as well. Add that and I'll rate you with a perfect score. Again very well written.
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