Now that was one great poem. Love it. You can feel the romance. You can feel the passion, the desire, the wanting, needing, and getting. Very exciting, Makes you want more. You dont want to quit reading. I will be reading more. Never boring. Lots of action.
Wow what a story. Thrilling yet a little scary. I love it. It kept me on the edge of my seat. I enjoyed it so much. I love to read good stories that keep me interested. You must have been writing for some time. All I can say is keep up the good work. Send many more. I relly dont see how much better. You can write your stories. Have a great day.
I think it is catchy. There are so many people that you would have to go through everyone to make sure you caught the right perdon. You have to ask yourself. Who has the most to gain. You need to know the what, when, why, where, how, every detail has to be looked at. Questions to be answered. There are so many things to think of.
This was good. It was sad yet gave you something to hold onto. Just like real life does. We have a lot of choices in life to make. Some good some bad. She went through a lot. I know about that. Thing is I think the more bad things you go through just gives you more lessons to learn. We learn alot from them. We need to see just how much we can take. Sometimes we take more then we thought we could. Life is not easy. But we can make it. One door closes another opens. I was really enjoying this.Keep up the good work. Im hoping someday to write a book. Right now Im doing poems.Thank you for an amazing story.
It is good.But didnt get much of my attention for some reason. I wasnt interested. But I do think it would be a good start for a book. Just keep on writing. The more youe. write the bettter you will get. Just keep on writing.
I like it. It reminds me of the ols says. When women did what the man wanted. Whether it was right or wrong. The words were great. It made you feel as though you was there living in that time. I truly enjoyed it. angel4u
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