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Review by Blissings
Rated: E | (4.5)
great work fellow Aussie!

I think however, the intro could start at paragraph 2, or even paragraph 3 with a little fix-it in the wording. It means the reader will be able to jump into the "guts" of the article much quicker, rather than wading through paragraphs of (entertaining though it may be) guff.

Keep up the great work! *Smile*
Anita
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