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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think that this work is a very interesting piece of reflection and connection. I think that this was flawless in the conveyance of the message and link you discovered. I agree with you in saying that it is a shame that the United States "once acted with such tragic malevolence". The only things that I would suggest is to correct punctuation and capitalization errors. I would also suggest that you alter your stanzas so that a complete thought is shown in each one. Overall, this was great!
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