You have a well written story,i really liked the short to the point sentences,this is something I try to icorporate in my writing. Even though they are short they are still very descriptive,espically when the narrator asks, Have you ever heard the story,....while he was climbing.But,in the end is he asking himself the question or is he asking the other person?,I didnt get it.
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