Wow. I'm sorry but you almost made me cry. Not for lack of quality or substance, but it hit home pretty hard. I liked the words you chose, and how you wound your sentence structures. The rhyming words weren't redundant and I suppose I would have liked and hated to read more, but I think it ended well.
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