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Review of Mask  
Review by JScott Todd
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow! That was very moving and powerful. I can almost feel an anguish reading this piece.
The words you chose with care, they fit in very well with this work.
You drew me into your poem from the very start, and kept me wanting to read all the way through. This is a poem that many will be able to relate to. And what I mean by this is that many, many people are feeling this same way currently. The first person in your poem is not alone by no means, a lot of us feel lost these days.
I love your poem, and I don't think any editing is necessary at all. Keep writing and posting!
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Review of The Walls  
Review by JScott Todd
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, what a powerful piece. You obviously have been writing for a long time. Your technique moved me right through the poem without stopping once.
Your words painted a clear picture of what you are trying to convey here. This is a brilliant, very moving poem.
This poem comes at a good time in current events as well, and needs to be read.
It needs absolutely no editing as far as my reading eyes are concerned! Keep writing and posting.

I have actually never read 1984 all the way through, however that might just be some good winter reading, thanks for the tip.
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