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Review of The Butterfly  
Review by Ana
Rated: E | (4.0)
At first, I expected that Marcus would be a prey. Then it turned out she was a meal in his eyes. But, I was surprised again by Gina's way of collecting friends and dinner. So, this was a refreshingly surprising ride with entertaining dialogue.

True,it was too short.I'd add some details. I am curious to learn more about the characters. For example, what kind of creature is Marcus who expected to feed on Gina? I would also like to see Gina transform from "butterfly" into her original shape.
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