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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The chapter with the "tickle scarabs" were really exactly what I was looking for. Like, why don't more of these have pussy tickling in them? That's a super sensitive area, and being tickled there is super humiliating. I only wish a scarab or two had crawled inside her, or that she had expressed concern of them maybe doing so. I'd also love to see more detailed description of them crawling on her privates, although the one that was written here was incredible. I just know that I would've creamed so hard if there was mention of them crawling over her clit, or something along those lines. The mention of her "lips" was pretty sweet, though. I'd be lying if I said that this didn't make me come.
Good work. I only wish it was longer.
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