CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression: Illustrious story. Very thorough and complete.
Plot: Creative, yet real.
Style and Voice: I liked your form completely.
Scene/Setting: Organized and not stiff or non-conforming.
Characters: Fantastic conceptions.
Dialog: Totally fit the story.
Grammar and Mechanics: Loved the way this flowed as I read. Like your word usage, exp. Dropping final letters!
Suggestions: Publish!!!
Thank you for generating your story on WDC. Create daily!
“All you need is ignorance and confidence and the success is sure.” Mark Twain
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
I found your story on [insert where you found the story (review request, plug page, random read, etc.)]. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find this feedback useful.
Overall Impression: WOW! Totally caught off guard with your ending!
Plot: Very thoughtful and creative.
Style and Voice: Very even and graceful.
Scene/Setting: Believable and introspective.
Characters: Full of realism.
Dialog: Very even and smoothly delivered.
Grammar and Mechanics: misspelled- compliment>complement,
Suggestions: Keep writing!!!
Thank you for generating your story on WDC. Create daily! It was my pleasure to have spent time with your writing!
“A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous.”
Ingrid Bergman
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Imaginative as well as original.
IMAGERY: Developed quickly and thoroughly.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Must admit I identify with many of the situations described in the poem!
INTERPRETATION: Rich and to the point.
QUALITY: Beyond pedestrian
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no mistakes.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Vibrant word usage and suitable sentence structure.
EFFORT: Top quality.
CONCLUDED: A worthy addition to your portfolio.
Famous Poet’s Quote: “A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life.” Charles Darwin
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Creative and apropos.
IMAGERY: Pleasant, specific and colorful.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Caught my attention and evoked
a sense of concern.
INTERPRETATION: Easily captured.
QUALITY: Exceeding average.
SPELLING ERRORS: None.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Your word management was flowing and even. Your rhyme patterns were good.
EFFORT: Notable
CONCLUDED: A fine effort with this poem.
Famous Poet’s Quote:“Belief creates the actual fact.”William James
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Clear and exact.
INTERPRETATION: This piece enthralled me.
QUALITY: Original and timely with the season of growing.
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no errors.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Word usage was powerful and flowing.
EFFORT: Peak.
CONCLUDED: I from Kansas, The Sunflower State! This was a superior work.
Famous Poet’s Quote: “A woodland in full color is awesome as a forest fire, in magnitude at least, but a single tree is like a dancing tongue of flame to warm the heart.”
Hal Borland
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Open and direct to the point.
IMAGERY: Reader dependent.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Anyone who has been associated with a patient, friend or family member who has endured a similar situation will identify with this work.
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: very imaginative and apropos.
IMAGERY: Completely vivid!
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: It made me smile and think as a child.
INTERPRETATION: Very open to the learner.
QUALITY: Great!!!
SPELLING ERRORS: None.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: I found the stream of your work relaxed and easily understood.
EFFORT: Exceptional.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
Famous Poet’s Quote: “Any healthy man can go without food for two days - but not without poetry. “ Charles Baudelaire
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Creative as well as timely for the season.
IMAGERY: Quite easily seen as one reads this work.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Even us grownups anticipate Christmas with cheer and happiness.
INTERPRETATION: Comprehension was organized and shepherded.
QUALITY: Notable for a seasonal work.
SPELLING ERRORS: NONE.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Good example of modern prose.
EFFORT: Purposeful and dedicated.
CONCLUDED: Exceptional work.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
Famous Poet’s Quote: “And I might add the confidence with which distracted persons do oftentimes, when they are awake, think, they see black fiends in places, where there is no black object in sight without them.”
Robert Boyle
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Does not apply, at this point.
IMAGERY: Depends upon who is reading and why?
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: This piece did not emotional response from me. I am afraid I did not recognize your implications.
INTERPRETATION: This will vary from reader to reader.
QUALITY: Average
SPELLING ERRORS: filgree > filigree, occassional>occasional, familiy >family, innane >inane, ealer > unsure of a suggestion.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Very individualized!
EFFORT: It appears the author is a multilayered thinker.
CONCLUDED:
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
Famous Poet’s Quote: “Everything that is new or uncommon raises a pleasure in the imagination, because it fills the soul with an agreeable surprise, gratifies its curiosity, and gives it an idea of which it was not before possessed.”
Joseph Addison
“A little philosophy inclineth man's mind to atheism, but depth in philosophy bringeth men's minds about to religion.”
Francis Bacon
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Tremendous choice for designation.
IMAGERY: Vivid and original assertion of choices.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: WOW, I was drawn to this flare of writing.
INTERPRETATION: Very open and direct for the reader’s clarification.
QUALITY: I would place this piece in my Top 10!
SPELLING ERRORS: can not, should be cannot.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: I had no problem with your punctuation.
EFFORT: Obviously written from personal connection.
CONCLUDED: This work is worthy enough to be published for a broader base!
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS: I feel as if I became one with the work due to prior experience with a similar experience.
Famous Poet’s Quote:” Every great advance in science has issued from a new audacity of imagination.” John Dewey
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Quite creative.
IMAGERY: Vivid throughout.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Creates scenes that evoke emotional attachment.
INTERPRETATION: Realistically and effortlessly understood.
QUALITY: Unique descriptions.
SPELLING ERRORS: I uncovered not one error.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Good job. I like the consistency of your rhyme patterns aabb.
EFFORT: Straight forward and clear-cut.
CONCLUDED: Another quality work by this author!
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
“For you and I are sons of one religion, and it is the spirit.
“I love you when you bow in your mosque, kneel in your temple, pray in your church.” Khalil Gibran
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Unique choice.
IMAGERY: Especially if the reader has had heart problems.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Tense.
INTERPRETATION: Pure and straightforward.
QUALITY: Timely.
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no errors.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Remove one of “the.”
EFFORT: Introspective.
CONCLUDED: Never give up or in.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
“Believe that life is worth living and your belief will help create the fact.”
William James
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Illustrious and first-rate.
IMAGERY: Very clear for the reader.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Makes one deliberate the knock-on effects.
INTERPRETATION: Very straight forward.
QUALITY: Exceptional.
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no errors.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Good. I like the pattern aabb.
EFFORT: Introspective.
CONCLUDED: Top quality.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
“A man has free choice to the extent that he is rational.”
Thomas Aquinas
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Entertaining
IMAGERY: Dreamlike for your audience.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Introspective.
INTERPRETATION: I felt it was personal.
QUALITY: Engaging.
SPELLING ERRORS: I discovered no spelling errors.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Flawless.
EFFORT: This was a great effort to create a mood of introspection.
CONCLUDED: A compelling and thoughtful work in creativity.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
“He that would live in peace and at ease must not speak all he knows or all he sees.” Benjamin Franklin
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Excellent choice.
IMAGERY: This was cultivated in good fashion.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: As I read this piece I was drawn deeper into the poem.
INTERPRETATION: It may very well vary from reader to reader.
QUALITY: Exceptional.
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no misspelled words.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: You might want to look back at your usage of commas (,).
EFFORT: Very thorough.
CONCLUDED: A very interesting presentation.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
A commodity appears at first sight an extremely obvious, trivial thing. But its analysis brings out that it is a very strange thing, abounding in metaphysical subtleties and theological niceties.
Karl Marx
*The following review is provided by Artemis Quill*
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Great title.
IMAGERY: GOOD DEVELOPMENT.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER:
INTERPRETATION: Easily read and appreciated.
QUALITY:
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no spelling inaccuracies.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: it’s should be replaced with its.
EFFORT: Good no matter the brevity.
CONCLUDED: I liked this effort.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
“Dreaming men are haunted men.”
Stephen Vincent Benet
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work. A.Quill
TITLE: Appropriate for your writing.
IMAGERY: You developed this well. The reader will reminisce.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Made me form various mental pictures.
INTERPRETATION: Good.
QUALITY: Very provocative insight.
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no spelling errors.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: It appears fitting for this poem.
EFFORT: Nice piece of work.
CONCLUDED: A good verse.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS:
“A loser doesn't know what he'll do if he loses, but talks about what he'll do if he wins, and a winner doesn't talk about what he'll do if he wins, but knows what he'll do if he loses. “
Eric Berne
CRITERION: I am reviewing your work, as you requested. I have attempted to be respectful, open-minded, honest, candid, direct, positive and encouraging. I have only my judgment to offer. On occasion, I find a morsel of work, I pondered that I might express my senses in this area. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.
TITLE: Extremely creative.
IMAGERY: With technology the mind is limitless, as here.
EMOTIONAL SENSE OF REVIEWER: Total confusion of possibilities.
INTERPRETATION: That is left to the reader?
QUALITY: Appropriate for topic.
SPELLING ERRORS: I believe those were intended by the author.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE: Suitable for the substance written.
EFFORT: Well thought-out.
CONCLUDED: Admirable work.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS: None, for the present.
A problem well stated is a problem half-solved.
Charles Kettering
CRITERION: This comes to you as a reader would see your creation. I have only my judgment to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a chord, it is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.
TITLE: Admirable choice.
IMAGERY: A vivid depiction of boy to man.
EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: A mother’s love constantly bequeaths a lifelong vestige.
INTERPRETATION: Love is interpreted in countless circumstances, here it is positive.
TONE: this was excellent.
SPELLING ERRORS: I found no spelling errors.
GRAMMAR: This slice of creativity shows good form.
FLOW: Smooth and easily read and enjoyed.
OVERALL: Excellent
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS: You can’t miss when you write about a good Mother.
Behavior is what a man does, not what he thinks, feels, or believes.
Emily Dickinson
CRITERION: This comes to you as a reader would see your creation. I have only my judgment to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a chord, it is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.
TITLE: Your title is content appropriate.
IMAGERY: Your word usage is very applicable.
EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: This piece arouses moral thought.
INTERPRETATION: Very open to the reader’s perception.
TONE: Calming and rich with the author’s beliefs.
SPELLING ERRORS: I uncovered no inaccuracies with your spelling.
GRAMMAR: Your grammar appears to be worthy.
FLOW: Even an tranquil to track.
OVERALL: Admirable as well as thorough.
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Kahlil Gibran
CRITERION: This comes to you as a reader would see your creation. I have only my judgment to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a chord, it is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.
TITLE: I am not sure if you want only 1 set of quotes with the title?
IMAGERY: The presentation gave this reader much to mentally focus upon.
EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: I was struck positively with subject matter of your work.
INTERPRETATION: I felt this to be quite open to the reader, in a worthy approach.
TONE: Serious and thought provoking.
SPELLING ERRORS: I did not find any errors.
GRAMMAR: The formatting of this piece appears to need work? It was difficult read with an even pace.
FLOW: Formatting differently will help this reflection.
OVERALL: A moving work!
“A man is truly ethical only when he obeys the compulsion to help all life which he is able to assist, and shrinks from injuring anything that lives.”
Albert Schweitzer
CRITERION: This comes to you as a reader would see your creation. I have only my judgment to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. It is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.
TITLE:Appears approiate for this piece.
IMAGERY:Excellent development throughout!
EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK:Made me think introspectivly.
INTERPRETATION:I felt you did an excellent activity with this work.
TONE:Moodt, yet, very interesting.
SPELLING ERRORS: *See fullmoon’s – full moon’s, otherside – other side, cord - cord
Patricia,
What a vast, thorough and wonderful guide for writers.
You did an outstanding job in creating the four areas for writers to read and absorb during their efforts to create.
It appears that you cover a complete spectrum for every writer to resource no matter which of the four areas he/she chooses to point their literary efforts.
I will definitely use this as a personal guide to support my efforts with creative writing!!!
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