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Review by D Kelley
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I just read my second piece of your work. I have now gained an insight to Catwoman and Writing.com. You have a fantastic family. I have no idea who started this site, But it is the best I have found. I find that when I review I also gain in my ability to write. I have learned that reviewing is the best way to improve your on writing. Thank You and your family for a place I can grow my abilities.
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Review by D Kelley
Rated: E | (4.5)
I wish I did not have to rate this to review it. I am very new at writing and have little understanding of all the different types of poetry and other forms of writing. I would like to understand. This seems to be just ramblings of the mind?
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Review of Chapter 3  
Review by D Kelley
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your text was very well written. You had something of interest happening at all time. This kept me reading none stop to the end. I do think there are a few places where you can reword some things and make it read a little easier. Some of the text was kind a, how can I say it.. Flat or plain. Kind a dull to read when you take each sentence by them selves. If you haven’t published anything yet, I know you will if you keep writing.

Good job
Write on and good luck
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Review by D Kelley
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am giving you a good review not because you told a story about hardships and God but, I beleave you told it from the heart.

Every thing in line and the story rolled on to the end. Or was it the end?

What kind of storys do you normaly tell?
Would like to see if you put your heart into your other work.

Sory about the 4.5 only God is perfect. We still need work.
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