Wow,this was an incredible story. The ending was something I would never have expected. If anything I thought she might be a crazy stalker who had escaped a mental institution or something.
This was a cute story! Other than a few spelling errors I didn't see anything wrong with it. It was heartfelt and also was about forgiveness and how sometimes we should listen to when people tell us not to do certain things because most of the time they're only trying to keep us safe.
This was a really cool story . The only critique I have is about some spelling and punctuation but I think all of us writers have heard that at least once before (especially when you type it and the computer or phone types in the wrong thing.) Overall I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more.
This story was one of the best short stories I've ever read! It kept me on the edge of my seat and I did not expect that shocking ending. I have to say I definitely want to read more!
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