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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think you have a good beginning here. I prefer to start with character and action, but your description does set the mood quite well.

It would probably involve careful historical research to make into a novella but the transistion would be easy enough from what i've just read.

I am not a great fan of those kind of stories, but I would probably read yours.
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