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Review of Arrogance  
Review by atemal
Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay, this poem is good. Really good actually. It shows emotion, and it shows thoughtfulness towards the person it was written about. The punctuation at the end of each sentence, not needed. It could have been a little longer, but, that may have ruined the poem too. That is sort of a double edged sword. You should always be looking out synonyms to make the poem flow better, and you should be looking to make your writings better as well. I hoped this helped!


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