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Review by Christie
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
I love the story to this poem and the mystery that it held. I was waiting to see what happened, but you left the end up to us. Very interesting and exciting. The beat was off on some of the lines a bit, which made it difficult to read at some points, but I also liked the green to red, and how it rhymed. Awesome.
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Review by Christie
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like it a lot! I think the line of pride and prejudice is somewhat clishe. But the rhyme is fantastic as well as your use of vocabulary.
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