The wondrous memories of childhood friends can never be forgotten. This was a great read, and I am happy to have read it. I haven't had a lot of critiquing under my belt but this is what I can safely say...I do agree with your descriptions. I believe they can also be more descriptive with emotion, to give the audience a somewhat metamorphosis type of transition. However, all in all, the idea, use of prose, and characterization was pretty well detailed. Thanks again for a good read.
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