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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great descriptions. I think that the child should have been more well behaved and someone else should have noticed the box of matches so the child didn't get a hold of them.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a great thing to read. I imagined this story in someplace like Ireland or somewhere in England. When I read this, it reminded me of the song "Puff the magic dragon." I felt kind of sad for the dragon when the girl left but I know that someone new will play with him soon.
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