Great poem! It says a lot in few words, which is why I like it a lot!!! However, I do have to say I would really like it longer, to see more of your talent! This is a good starting point though! What I might suggest is working a lot on this, and if this is a true story about yourself, show more things you feel. If not, then try putting yourself in a person that might be experiencing that's shoes. Overall, a fantastic start! Tell me when you add to it! Well, that's it, good luck!
cool contest, but don't you think the prizes are a little low? I mean, 2000 for 1st place? I could see that being reasonable if there were only a few people entering, but in the last round, quite a few people entered. And that 5000 donation from whoever it was is more then enough to cover the prizes. Just giving you a way to make the contest better.....
Evil Nerd
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