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Review by Brian Andrews
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Nicely done! I really like the way the characters interact with each other, and how clearly you show their emotional responses to their environment and each other. The imagery you convey with the ant is also just amazing, and you portray God in a light I appreciate and understand myself. The script flows nicely and the writing style is easy to read and enjoyable. It's light, but not so light as to take away the seriousness of your message.
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