You may well have put me off of poetry forever. I will never see lines on a page without thinking, "How can I cover the 3-10 pin split. The romance is gone. Thank you, it was fun to read. Carry on. Doggerel lives!
Well written and a fine tale. Thanks for your post. I'm not much on the Heaven and other places thing but you reach the point of hope which is what keeps us all going. Good luck.
Editing and lots of it. Some of the sentences need to end sooner. If there is a point to this chapter you need to refine it. A tip: read your work out loud with an eye on punctuation. Don't stop the work is in the edit. Good luck...
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