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Review of Nine One One  
Review by Beau
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked, how you ended it with the Humptey dumpy really cute in my opinion.
Also, you made it seem like it was not what seems, in till the end, which made me want to read on in till i could figure out what was happening. But sincerity, i really did like what you did there, with how it seemed ''like an huge event leading to an big story'' it dragged in my interest to read all the way to the end. Good Job reminded me of the great fairy tale stories i loved listening to when i was little.
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