um, i didn't find this particularly thrilling. I say that only because i was not continuing to read to find out what happened next as such, i was intrigued to find the climax of the piece. My definition, it has the effect of a thriller, having the audience think about the story once they have finished, but it doesn't hold the suspense a regular run-of-the-mill thriller has. I am a little up in the air on this one, but i finished reading, so it cant have been that bad.
I think that if you gave us a little more on who the driver was, just a tiny bit of information, it would change my opinion.
For a number of people this would be brilliant, but this dosent quite hit the spot for me.
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